Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Brain Storming Technology

Technology is a term used for the advancement in our society.

A computer best represents technology.

I believe it is a mixture of ourselves, the government, and private tech companies.

When I lose control of my personal information, all privacy is lost which can lead to worse things such as identity theft.

Monday, March 2, 2009

Rough Outline and Thesis statement

Thesis Statement: The California budget cuts are careless because it negatively affects schools, deprives benefits from students, and takes away from workers.

  1. The budget cuts negatively affects schools.
  • Takes away funding
  • Less teachers
  • Not able to function as well as before

2. It deprives benefits from students

  • Fewer money given to low income students
  • Fewer scholorships
  • Fewer reasources

3. It takes away from workers

  • Less compensation
  • Some would be out of jobs
  • Fewer benefits